A MOMENT BETWEEN US !!

  A moment between us !! 

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A moment of silence ,
A moment of pain .
A moment of sadness ,
A moment of madness .

A moment for you ,
A moment for me .
Where the clock stops ,
And there is just you and me .

A moment where the wind stops ,
A moment where the hills laugh .
Where we are so close ,
That nobody can define .

A moment of our breath going high ,
A moment where the stars are twinkling in the sky .
A moment where you are in my arms ,
And I am in yours .
And at that moment i just wanna say ,
That you are all mine .

By : Rishabh Mishra

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39 Comments Add yours

  1. Shubham Rakshit says:

    Very Nice Bro..
    keep up the good work!

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  2. Words Shower says:

    Words are portrayed in a beautiful way…

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  3. Tarannum says:

    Beautifully written… Love this

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  4. Paridhee says:

    Beautiful lines well done Rishabh.

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  5. Aliya siddiqui says:

    Beautiful n heart touching

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  6. Avishek Singh says:

    Very well written…:-)

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  7. GP Cox says:

    Very good. I prefer more of a rhyme with words that are not so much alike, like sadness/madness. Told you I’m not a good review person. My mind went to:
    A moment of silence
    A moment of pain,
    A moment of grief
    And of going insane.

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    1. Will do …thanks for the suggestion GP Cox !! 😊

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  8. Good one Rishabh! That one moment can be one of realisation, bliss, forgiveness, it can be a moment that can change life!

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      1. Rekha Sahay says:

        I am already following you n liked your posrs.
        There is some problem , as yr blog always unfollows me

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  9. RITU RAJ says:

    relatable… 🙂

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    1. Thanks ritu ….do follow us for more such poetries !! 😊

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    1. Thanks a lot ….do follow to read stuffs like this !! 😊

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    1. Thankyou …. follow us to keep reading such stuffs from me !! 😊

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      1. Already done brother. You’re an amazing storyteller.

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      2. Thanks a lot bro !! 😊

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  10. bhaatdal says:

    Moments .. beautiful ..

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  11. Delightfully romantic and poetic! Thanks for visiting me at Roughwighting. Love what you’re doing here!

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    1. your appreciation means a lot to me !!
      don’t forget to follow !!

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  12. Oh so beautiful words of aloneness of being together. Loved the awesome picture too. Great words.

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      1. For sure and it would be so nice if you too can say a few words with my post. It is good to have feedbacks.

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  13. So sweet actually.. simple and complete 😊😊

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  14. kbtm says:

    this entry is so good! like i’ve felt so much emotions in the words.

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  15. So beautiful! I love poetry and this poem took me to “that moment”. Priceless. ♥

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  16. Beautifully done! Very moving! I know this is a love poem but I have a friend who just lost his wife (73) and the first stanza describes his feelings completely! I would suggest/urge you to consider writing something off of this stanza that speaks to the heart of one who has lost their beloved soulmate to death and feels as your first stanza starts out. I think you might have another beautiful poem waiting to be born???

    I sent my friend a copy of my “A FLICKERING SOUL” (come read it on my site) when I found out his wife died and he has asked me to read it at her service and they have printed it in the program. I was so honored. Perhaps? This is something that lies ahead for you too, My Friend???

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  17. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Come and read “A Moment Between Us”

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  18. sneha saumya says:

    It’s really beautiful 👌…

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