THE ETERNAL LOVE

The Eternal Love

 

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The journey of love and the last hour left,
Close your eyes,hold my hand..
Forget that sand castle,
That the waves swept…

That red saree of yours,
paired with red BINDI on forehead,
Mesmerising black kajal eye,
And those departure tears you shed.
I want to repeat that time
in these last forty five minutes of our,
Completing the promise of love
i always wanna shower….

That fear in my eyes,
That smile on your lips
Waiting outside the Operation theater,
I was getting ‘How to become a good father’ tips.
Our baby’s first cry noise,
Resembles the silence in minutes left thirty.
Death can’t seperate us my love,
Our love is eternal and thats worthy…

I still remember the day
when she,our doll, went first for school,
She cried holding my fingers
You were also crying like a fool…
Now its the time for you to walk alone,
So promise me in this last minute fifteen
You’ll be strong for the rest,
You’ll always be my queen…

This sight of yours,
In the last five minutes of mine,
The way you want to hold me longer,
This peace feels like divine…

Yes I am closing my eyes forever,
but my love won’t leave your side.
Just live the moments again
and the rules of love that hearts abide…

 

BY : Ishita Sinha

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18 Comments Add yours

  1. That’s lovely! πŸ™‚

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  2. Kashyap says:

    Outstanding πŸ˜—

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  3. soiba says:

    Heart-touching!

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  4. Lost soul says:

    True love is indeed eternal ❀️ Beautiful. ❀️

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  5. VishalDutia says:

    Love never die nice one πŸ’

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  6. Aditya Akash says:

    Mast….Shandar jabadast zindabad…

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  7. I’m all teary 😒 now…. I like the imbibe of the local words. It gives the whole piece a sense of belonging.
    It also captures the menace of maternal mortality; a battle in progress in my country. And finally the love that lingers till eternity; that’s all I’m wishing πŸ‘Œ

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    1. ISHITA SINHA says:

      thank you so much for this review…. πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      m so glad u loved it
      keep reading…

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    1. ISHITA SINHA says:

      its my pleasure u likedπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  8. Rudra Abhishek Manglam says:

    Love – Connection between two bodies by heart without any noise….once they connect perfectly it can’t b breakdown anymore,anywhere…#love4love❀

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    1. ISHITA SINHA says:

      thanks dear…. ur comment seems more pleasing than the poem itself…. keep reading πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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    1. ISHITA SINHA says:

      thanks… keep reading πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

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  9. Very profound ❀ I have written a story long ago with the same title 'Eternal L
    ove' but with a different perception. Please drop by to read my story. πŸ™‚ https://munazafathima.wordpress.com/2015/08/17/eternal-love-3/

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