BURNING BRIDE

           Burning Bride 

 

deepak

 

When Girls in home
Treated like a Queen 
Way to school
Just like Son
Fulfils Dream of all aspects
It’s the society’s real fact
But when Girls got an adult mind
Father wants a Boy of her kind
18-20 the age of marriage arrangements 
But the heart of Girl divided in many segments. 
Marriage are made in heaven 
But Dowry has made it’s a business transaction 
Dowry is a tough Demand
For Girls side it’s a tough command
Girl’s Family behave like a Democracy 
But opponents are Autocracy 
It’s the symbol of dirty mind
Everywhere it will be find
They demand Bike
But don’t not know how to ride
Tears drop down from my Eyes 
When I see the Burning Bride
It should be avoided 
In fact love should be provided.
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8 Comments Add yours

  1. Lost soul says:

    A harsh reality!!!

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  2. Wow, that was really good, not to mention deep. You should be a songwriter!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. The idea is simple and relatable. Work on the spelling and the flow of the English. There is so much depth and beauty in your writing.The display only needs to match the the content. Keep in touch.

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  4. calladablog says:

    It’s like everyone’s in a pressure cooker to fulfill some sort of demand. With this, it seems like it’s always easier for the woman to be the lost cause. I hear you.

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  5. Kevin Muniu says:

    Wow, such beauty in your style. Intense too!

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  6. utahan15 says:

    the union of the snake
    or the lady of the lake
    arranged anything
    called love
    is rubbish
    the old style
    no smile
    woman left side
    of other
    side of our earth!

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Vivian Zems says:

    A powerful poem with an equally important message.Well penned!

    Like

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