WHY CHILD LABOUR !!

       Why Child Labour !!

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We live in the country of heroes
But our acts are like zeros.
People think that labour is cool
But actually they are fool.
Children are gift of god
Child labour is like giving them sword.
Society thinks that they work so well
And make their future hell.
Children make their Nation proud
We have to raise their voice loud.
Can it be stop by fear?
We have to think it clear.
Stop acting like zeroes
We have to make some another heroes.
              BY : SAURAV RAJ 
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29 Comments Add yours

  1. Secretgarden19.wordpress.com says:

    Beautiful and very moving.

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  2. Luke Thorne says:

    Excellent poem 🙂

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  3. You asked a review: I think it was put too mildly. It’s a subject that requires a very strong expression. Child labour is an abomination!

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    1. SALAM. RAZA. says:

      Very impressive

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  4. All children are a gift from God. Every single life, every child, is a reward and blessing. And until people start to love, believe and trust like children, there will always be injustice and evil in this world. Thank you for your poem, your passion shines through. Love, Inkblotchpoison.

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  5. satyam singh rathore says:

    Nice bor … it is sooo good … yar…very very nice

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  6. nowheyjen says:

    that ending is amazing

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  7. jilloftrades says:

    This is a nice poem! Great job!

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  8. haifabulous says:

    This is a very nice poem! I like the different perspective you’ve put in 🙂

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  9. Your poem is Conveying a good message. 👌👍

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  10. Debbywebby says:

    Hi, you asked for a review:
    I get the message of the poem and it’s powerful. There are however a few mistakes concerning the grammar, spelling and I believed you can use more fitting words to make it more compelling. Overall I think you have a beautiful heart and mind to write a poem with such a relevant message. Wish you all the best!

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    1. SALAM. RAZA. says:

      What a nice poem

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  11. SALAM. RAZA. says:

    So amazing

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  12. Raunak kumar says:

    I am new to join this

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  13. sherinsk says:

    Actually i believe a good blog should contain variety of topics which your blog has 🙂

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    1. Thanks …do follow us !!

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